This is an idea you have? because it looks pretty nice or is this already in existence?
Either way it looks pretty fun.. Um you seemed to have brought up most of the factions that are really of any importance to you (specially because keepers do tend to like liberty some days) but you might also want to bring up the fact that should keepers attack.. are you going to work with the order who show up to help or are you going to create a giant brawl? because it would seem like you have the choice to make an exception during multiple factions showing up... like even if you say "the order shall leave once this is over" which for the most part.. order will leave after the keeper threat has been taken care of.. so that is actually the only thought I can think of.. other than that it is very well thought out
Lan's Logs
These cover the growth of my characters.