RP realism

[Alpha 429]

ok i will admit that me and Kane did take it a bit too far but this was my first major RP storymaking attempt. I added my little twist because it was something no one expected and i was going to follow with a little bit of my characters history. I was one post away when Kane blew my idea apart. Fair enough he had a right to add his little twists as well however it angered me that he hadnt read my earlier post correctly and his post was from the stories point of view almost impossible. That being said i added my next post and overcame the problem. For a little while after that it was me and Kane countering each other posts after another then I went to my bed for the night. Today i get in from school to see the story has progressed quite a bit (btw Angel i like what you have done to the Chancellor :) )
But again when Kane has posted he hasnt read my earlier posts properly again.
Off the top of my head here are the problems i have with Kanes post (if i have made a mistake or missed something plz correct me)

1) despite emphasizing how hidden the base was and the fact it was cloaked and how heavily guarded the med lab was outside the door Black Legion troops still manage to board the station and undetected get through the station and past security at the front door and inside to help Kreig "rescue the chancellor" highly unlikely as i said about 15 people actually knew where it was.

2) when i beam the commandos into space (I cant be bothered arguing about it but i wont use beam tech again if it annoys people) Kane says i beam my own doctor into space, unlikely that my character would do something that stupid but there is such a thing as human error i suppose.

3) In a post I command the base commander to destroy any transport that comes near but Kane says that a transport full of reinland marine breach the corridor by smashing through the wall.

IMO the story was coming along brillliantly but when i add my little twist Kane comes in and without properly reading my post starts adding things that are a little far-fetched and it soon becomes me and him continuously coming up with ways to out do the other. I might be taking this too far but it kind of ruined the story a little (but it's still good)

PSKane if i am wrong about you not reading the post correctly i appologise but it was the impression I got.

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