Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP

[Jihadjoe]

It's very very good. Very little on this forum has actualy moved my emotionally, and usualy I'm pretty detatched, but this is very, very good.

I know someone who was abused as a child, and the shamed look you describe is exactly right. Maybe you should add a warning to the title of it, "may find this harrowing".

Aside from that, the writing style is just getting better.

Can i ask somewhat ahead of time, do you plan to carry on this RP ad infinitum or do you have an ending for it?

And Dop... sadly yes it is possible, but it would be a miracle if she survived it.... My friend was 4, and there have been cases of babys.

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