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[gronath]

It's supposed to be twisted. It's supposed to be pretty sick. That's the point. Read on. It get's better.
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Aside form that, the writing style is just getting better.
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And Dop... sadly yes it is possible, but it would be a miracle if she survived it.... My friend was 4, and there have been cases of babys.

Maybe at least a warning would be at hand there, Vince. I think the sensible thing to do, since this has been pointed out is at least post one before with the very first thread and before those where that kind of subject is portrayed.

This story contains material that may be considered offensive, shocking or be qualified as adult content to some readers (murder, afterlife, sexual and domestic violence connotations and other not so cheerful things). Proceed reading it at your own discretion.

On a side note, there's a movie I'm particularly fond of called "Bliss". It's an adult movie, but very, very tasteful that goes on - among other things - about this.

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