Artisan Farmers Alliance

[Xoria]

What is there is pretty much criticism-proof.
What isn't there is...well, not there.
What are the practical procedures of AFA? General piracy? Piracy of foreign corporations? What about generic traders with no IFF?
I ran into you in my trader once, Zelot, and apart from your tag and ID, I saw no difference between you and any old pirate somewhere else: you wanted my money, and you proceeded to try to kill me when I tried to escape. (I'm not complaining about that, btw) Ok, so how is AFA different from a generic pirate ID in Kusari? You mention political goals and propaganda in a general sort of way, but how does that translate into what happens when you encounter different sorts of commercial factions?
None of these points are really criticisms. I think answering them would make AFA seem a lot more interesting to players who take a look at joining.
To put it another way, just like a hit song, every clan needs a "hook", a compelling draw that pulls people into the concept. You hint at what it is for AFA, but I think you could substantially flesh it out some more.
What you've got here is a promising beginning...give us more.

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