Suppy's Feedback Thread

[Valarin]

I've just caught sight of your in-progress story, Ten Thousand Years of the Kusari Republic, and seeing a nice big feedback link in your signature, thought I'd come chip in as this thread is sadly empty!

I'm really enjoying the story so far, and I think it's fantastically written. The characters are engaging and you're particularly good at conveying their moods and atmospheres. Keep it up! I can't wait to read further and see where Kyoko's adventures take her and the crew of the Chokai. You can consider me an interested reader who'll eagerly follow your work . I'm especially fond of your attention to detail with ranks, names, procedure etc. - it just makes the story all that more immersive!

Great work!
- V.

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