The Black Ravens - Feedback

[Sabru]

I'd really like to see factions putting their complete and whole information, ranks, diplomacy, lore, etc. on the forums, and not just putting parts of it.

Doing so, putting just partials. would result in huge misunderstandings, inconvenience, and might also create a bad image of the faction.

I preferred that you worked harder on the lore, before putting it here.

Just 2 cents.

I am understud it. And I'm work hard to make uniqual history and ranks, also. I am do not copy Privaters lore. Wish to know why Pirate's? Because inRP we undercover agents. And use Liberty Navy or Bretonia Armed Forces ships will be some...significant. So, inRP I wish that "Ravens" look like are new pirate/terroristic guild. But in real we secretly work with Bretonia and Liberty lawful forces.

first off, those colors are horrible and annoying to try and read. granted, Katana's color isnt much better.

2. i get you want to be creative, but there are existing factions out there that could use people playing them.

thirdly:

I am understud it. And I'm work hard to make uniqual history and ranks, also. I am do not copy Privaters lore. Wish to know why Pirate's? Because inRP we undercover agents.

Sure you can do that. but:

And use Liberty Navy or Bretonia Armed Forces ships will be some...significant.

Mr. Techchart would disagree with that plan. Mr. Techchart would be fine with it only if mister SRP said it was ok. catching my drift?

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