(10-08-2014, 07:42 PM)Derkylos Wrote: This seems very nebulous, and, as such, is very hard to comment on. IMO, anyone fighting for an independent Texas is out of their minds, 'coz that place is a hell-hole of dark matter and radiation.
But if you wanna have a go at it, work out who's fighting for it and why, THEN ask for feedback. It's much more likely to be constructive if you have a partially fleshed out idea.
@Texas.Red -Xenos primary role disposing of any foreign influence in Liberty i don't see the liberating something part and no thx i said i don't wanna join Xenos.
@Derkylos - I asked for help and feedback that means i need help for writing the lore and making the faction what should be .