This is really good actually. +1 for all the effort you put into this.
The only thing you need to address is that The Core ID is incorrect and it's actually this:
The pilot carrying this ID is a member of the The Core who:
-Can attack lawfuls, unlawfuls and quasi-lawfuls in self-defence, to protect an allied or neutral ship, or in defence of allied or neutral bases.
-Can attack Wild, Nomad and Order ships and any ships equipped with Nomad equipment.
-Can fulfil lawful bounty and escorts contracts and treat transports as combat targets when executing a bounty or escort contract against them.
-Can attack lawfuls, unlawfuls, quasi-lawfuls and ships which belong to a house or organisation considered hostile by the The Core within their zone of influence, or are in violation of the laws of The Core.
-Can demand contraband and levy fines within their Zone of influence and attack ships if they refuse to comply.
-Cannot bring Cruisers or Battleships into any system containing a Jump Gate with the exception of Sigma-19, Sigma-17 and the Omicrons.
-Cannot use transports with more than 4,300 cargo.