That's already much better Anomander! A few small changes and we should have a deal.
Is there a place intended for a character picture? If not, how about adding one on the left side over the yellow center line (maybe the crest-ish art in the middle has to be moved slightly to the right for that? Moving it for a character pic space might also make it look less symetric, might look even better.
But yeah that's all that came up in our Skype group so far. Good job!