That one is very good improvement. I really like the shape. The backward part of the ship (from engine edge to the reactors) looks nice but the primary one needs some love. This model might be potential candidate for submission in future but it does need few changes (full feedback) which will hint you asap cuz am not at home.
@Mao - what you said about "1" and "2" to be removed is not necessary. These parts are very good looking and serve a lot of things but primary one is their nice addition to the model to represent a fish design "Fins", which every bretonian cap contains in itself. Without them the model would look empty and incomplete. You are right that the two reactors should be replaced with a big one so +1 on that. I don't agree that it needs triple engines - my opinion. Most bretonian ships have two engines only and the dunkirk one, so its logical assumption the carrier to have not one but two strong engines, with dunkirk design. Three is too much (consider the RP that Bretonia is lacking resources). As for the "cylinders", perhaps you miss the point that these are actually weapon hard points - so once you put weapons there you wont even see these "crosses" (the cross is present on every bretonian ship hard point. Similar repetitive hard points could be found on the Shire and they do look nice.)
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