Morph logs of: Erato

[Nosferath]

Looks very nice for a first log. I've been absent for a while, and this is the first use I see of the mimicry.
It is common for morphs at first to have conversations that are just about the stuff that surrounds them (shields, planets, cargo...). You can get richer RP if you bring more complex subjects to the conversation, like moral issues or faction relationships.

Tips:

• It's not necessary to use so many ellipses (...).
  
• Avoid three-word sentences. You can be as fluid as a human with your speech, use that to your advantage.
  
• Find more ways to say the same thing. 'Darklings' can get old very quickly. You can instead say things like, "Rock~eater [from the orange clouds]" (Kruger), or "Gate~builder" (Ageira), for instance. Try to come up with your own.
  

That's all for now.

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