ID Changes/Rework - Community Input requested

[TheSauron]

ID NAME: The Order
CURRENT ID TEXT:

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The Order is an organisation which has its roots in Liberty. Founded to counter the threat posed by subversion of human bodies by the aliens known as ""Nomads"", the Order operates Siriuswide to counteract Nomad activity. They are considered a terrorist faction by all major Houses however, and are in conflict with the Core. Their allies include the Bundschuh and the Blood Dragons.

Pilot carrying this unlawful ID is a member of The Order, who:

Is allowed to do the following anywhere:
-Can trade
-Can escort neutral and allied ships
-Can attack lawfuls, unlawfuls and quasi-lawfuls in self-defense, to protect an allied or neutral lawful ship, or in defense of bases of the same affiliation
-Can attack unlawfuls, quasi-lawfuls and ships which belong to a house or organisation considered hostile by the Order, except transports
-Can attack Wild, Nomad, Outcasts, BHG, Core, LSF, MND, Kempeitai, and BIS ships, and any ships equipped with Nomad equipment
-Can demand Artifacts, Nomad equipment, and Nomad Remains, then attack ships if they refuse to comply
-Can attack any ship considered hostile by the Order, except Freighters and Transports
-Can fulfill bounties against targets considered hostile by the Order

Is not allowed to do the following:
-Cannot bring cruiser or bigger to systems containing a Human Jump Gate, except Sigma 17 and Sigma 19
-Cannot participate in unlawful actions except as described above

Allowed ships: Fighters, Freighters, Transports, Gunboats, Cruisers, Battleships

PROPOSED CHANGES/ADDITIONS:

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Remove one of the highlighted lines.

JUSTIFICATION FOR CHANGES:

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The two marked lines mean the very same thing.

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One MD Admiral