ID Changes/Rework - Community Input requested

[Impyness]

ID NAME: The Core
CURRENT ID TEXT:

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"The Core ID:

The Core is a Private Military Company operating within Edgeworlds and some Borderworlds. They're relentless and willing to do whatever it takes in order to crush their enemies and obtain alien technology within the Edgeworlds and Borderworlds. Any who oppose the Core, namely factions such as the Order and the Corsairs, are attacked without mercy. The Core is maintained by AP Manufacturing, and has strong relations with Rheinland.

The pilot carrying this lawful ID is a member of the the Core, who:

Is allowed to do the following anywhere:
-Can trade
-Can defend itself, ships and bases of the same affiliation
-Can attack Wild, Nomad, Order ships, and any ships equipped with Nomad or Order equipment
-Can fulfil lawful bounty and escorts contracts and treat transports as combat targets when executing a bounty or escort contract against them

Is allowed to do the following within their Zone of Influence:
-Can attack lawfuls, unlawfuls, quasi-lawfuls, and ships which belong to a house or organisation considered hostile by the the Core
-Can demand Alien Artifacts, Nomad equipment, Nomad remains, and Order equipment, then attack ships if they refuse to comply
-Can enforce the laws of the Core within systems containing a Core base. Can thus demand contraband and levy fines against ships in violation of the laws of the Core, then attack ships if they refuse to comply

Is not allowed to do the following:
-Cannot bring Cruisers or Battleships into any system containing a Jump Gate, with the exception of Sigma-19, Sigma-17 and the Omicrons.
-Cannot use transports with more than 4,300 cargo
-Cannot participate in unlawful actions except as described above

Zone of Influence: Omicrons, systems directly bordering the Omicrons
Allowed ships: Fighters, Freighters, Transports, Gunboats, Cruisers, Battleships"

PROPOSED CHANGES/ADDITIONS:

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"The Core ID:

The Core is a Private Military Company operating within Edgeworlds and some Borderworlds. They're relentless and willing to do whatever it takes in order to crush their enemies and obtain alien technology within the Edgeworlds and Borderworlds. Any who oppose the Core, namely factions such as the Order and the Corsairs, are attacked without mercy. The Core is maintained by AP Manufacturing, and has strong relations with Rheinland.

The pilot carrying this lawful ID is a member of the the Core, who:

Is allowed to do the following anywhere:
-Can trade
-Can defend itself, ships and bases of the same affiliation
-Can attack Wild, Nomad, Order ships, and any ships equipped with Nomad or Order equipment
-Can fulfil lawful bounty and escorts contracts and treat transports as combat targets when executing a bounty or escort contract against them < - delete

Is allowed to do the following within their Zone of Influence:
-Can attack lawfuls, unlawfuls, quasi-lawfuls, and ships which belong to a house or organisation considered hostile by the the Core < - delete
-Can demand Alien Artifacts, Nomad equipment, Nomad remains, and Order equipment, then attack ships if they refuse to comply
-Can enforce the laws of the Core within systems containing a Core base. Can thus demand contraband and levy fines against ships in violation of the laws of the Core, then attack ships if they refuse to comply < - delete

Is not allowed to do the following:
-Cannot bring Cruisers or Battleships into any system containing a Jump Gate, with the exception of Sigma-19, Sigma-17 and the Omicrons.
-Cannot use transports with more than 4,300 cargo
-Cannot participate in unlawful actions except as described above

Zone of Influence: Omicrons, systems directly bordering the Omicrons
Allowed ships: Fighters, Freighters, Transports, Gunboats, Cruisers, Battleships"

JUSTIFICATION FOR CHANGES:

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After deleting all of the yellow text listed here I believe the ID should be ready for use. ZOI is fine since Core only has bases in the Omicrons and for situations where they might need to go and shoot at wild in other houses they have a line specifying they can do so anywhere. The attack quasi/unlawfuls thing is silly because it's basically attack ANYTHING in zoi. If someone is breaking laws in their space or has broken them that isn't part of a group that is specifically hostile they can be fined. Core also doesn't really do bounties anymore so they dont need that line.