Morph Logs of Vor'Tice

[Cælumaresh]

The overal looks seem good to me, (keep in mind that i am not K'hara, just someone who did a lot of nomRP back in the day), but you could change a bit here and there. Ill just give you a few examples as im terrible at explaining

[11.04.2016 09:47:09] Vor'Tice: *** HOW, ~ARE ~YOU?

This for instance. You can make this more spacesquid-ish by writing something like this for example:

** ~Ours~ senses 'presence off' -Darkling- (Warmth) **

Then, this aswell:

[10.04.2016 14:40:54] Vor'Tice: ::... AI ~~~ Why are you here in Delta? ***::

The :: generally indicates you are talking as a robot, opposed to the cryptical mind-tingling you get from Nomads. Stick to using *, ** or *** as openers and closers of your sentences, otherwise some people might get confused.

[08.04.2016 13:24:56] Vor'Tice: *** Hi***

Generally when meeting another nomad, they say something along the lines of ** (warmth) **

[10.04.2016 14:51:41] Vor'Tice: // "" be metal not have mind, ~~ or feelinf ... Null existence. *** Purpose cold. ... Unnatural ""

This does not look like intentional OORP, but the // usually indicates you are talking out of character. Avoid using that as nomspeak

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