Morph Logs: The.Infinite.Light

[Nosferath]

Hey there. You should stick to pastebin, it does work. Or use quotes, as Zyliath said.
That being said, here's some feedback for your logs:
-You're using way too many backslashes (\ \). And you already use apostrophes (' ') for those words, so there's no need for double symbols. EDIT: It seems you fixed that on your next logs. Good.
-You are also using too many ellipses. Think "what purpose do they accomplish in this sentence?". If you can use a connector instead of "...", use the connector.
-Fortunately, your phrases are nice and complex, as opposed to the common 3-word syndrome that's present in most young morphs.

Be sure to post more logs in order to keep track of your improvement, and identify mistakes.

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