The Commune (C~

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Basically what you're saying is
"I can write a some roleplay lines properly! Give me Officialdom!"
There are some standards, and you can clearly see them by observing other Official Factions.

It's funny how you come here and yell about it yet, I believe you didn't took a single peek of a eye on what are we doing even before, we've submited the official faction request.

Also:
[18.07.2016 11:32:00] Commune 1: ?: I'm going to restock and then go back to chase you little pathetic worms.
[18.07.2016 11:32:05] Commune 1: ?: Base huggers.

These lines are really ooRP, especially those terms. Anyone would recognize them and it would break immersion.

Since when? The character told what he will do and, called them base huggers, which they were basically doing. I don't see a problem here. Why do you see? I mean, if the terms are ooRP, you should first refer to gentlemen who actually did it, not here to this thread because, the player who've flown the character only reacted to what they did.

[18.07.2016 11:36:42] Order Nephthys: You don't have a base in Mu, don't be silly.
[18.07.2016 11:37:06] Commune 1: ?: Oh we do. If you actualy knew something, you would see me now.

lolwat. Is this what you call Official-Faction-quality roleplay?

Bottom of the line is that this isn't what I would like to see from a faction which wants to go official, because this, simply put, isn't the quality for it.

First of all, I've never seen you doing ANY role play, especially quality since, you didn't do any so sit down on the ground. - and character can lie inRP, too.

This should concern you greatly. Here I am, giving you constructive criticism and you're just going "so wat???"

Well, basically, it doesen't concerns me greatly because, you're not giving constructive criticism but obviously, you were hurt by our RP. I can only apologyze for your pain, but I can't still figure out why. You're coming here to me, to attempt to ruin what I'm trying to acomplish- it's understandable, you're mad or jellaus or whatever. Thata's my impression about you now.

What does this have to do with anything? You accusing me of roleplaying sexually? Please. I am all about those Blues

Here we can confirm your... attitude- next is... oh yeah;

I literally have no idea what are you talking about. And what research should I do? Check the age of Commune members and see why they roleplay so childishly?

Yep. The age of the players. I've had enough of this.