Forgive me if I did not see it, what what will your ZOI be? I think people would frown upon you and your faction mates if you just ran all over Sirius killing all these factions when they logged on. You really need a ZOI and if those factions happen to cross through it, then you can hunt them. However, I think hunting them when they log on and crossing 4+ systems just to kill them would be a little extreme.
Other than that, it's kind of short, but that can be changed in time. Add a more detailed Affiliations section to show your attitude towards other factions, that way people know how to approach you if you stumble on to them.
