I have little to complain about, here. Most of it looks very good and very detailed. I have a few qualms with the diplomacy, though:
1. Gateway is known as Highland-Gateway Ltd. or HGL, if you'd like to abbreviate. The new name is to differentiate us from the NPC Faction and emphasize our growth from the original Gateway. (EDIT: oops, Trevelyan already said this...)
2. What about the Artisan Farmer's Alliance? I don't see them there. I'd think we'd be kind of neutral considering that you have such a good relationship with Kusari, but that is more for Zelot to decide...
The fact remains, though, that it is very well written. Best of luck to you!
[8:32:45 PM] Dusty Lens: Oh no, let me get that. Hello? Oh it's my grandma. She says to be roleplay.
[12:49:19 AM] Elgatodiablo: You know its nice that you have all that proof and all, Bacon... but I just don't believe you.