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Mao

02-15-2017, 10:13 PM,

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1. What's the "Stormclaw banner"?
2. "Joker’s betrayal of humanity". Who's he? What did he do? What was Blackguard's connection to him? Where's Batman?
3. "was formed for the reason of eliminating the deep threats within the Sirius sector" That's extremely vague. What deep threats within Sirius?
4. Who is this "she" we keep reading about in your story?
5. "to look for the old Blackguard lores" on a distant planet in outer space? Where? The lore of BG is an ancient scroll? Besides, that's a one man job. It's not important for the faction info page.

As it is now, your faction background is very vague. It looks like you rushed for officialdom without putting effort behind this faction.

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[BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 02-12-2017, 06:24 PM

RE: Tracking Request: [BG]- The Blackguard - by Hannibal - 02-12-2017, 07:51 PM

RE: Tracking Request: [BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 02-13-2017, 02:56 AM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by Kalhmera - 02-13-2017, 03:04 AM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 02-13-2017, 03:15 AM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by St.Denis - 02-13-2017, 08:06 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by Kalhmera - 02-13-2017, 08:10 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 02-15-2017, 06:14 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by Mao - 02-15-2017, 10:13 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by thisDerius - 02-15-2017, 10:19 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by Mao - 02-15-2017, 10:22 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by thisDerius - 02-15-2017, 10:30 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 02-20-2017, 12:45 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by Jeremy Hunter - 02-20-2017, 01:39 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by thisDerius - 02-20-2017, 02:32 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by Jeremy Hunter - 02-20-2017, 02:38 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by thisDerius - 02-20-2017, 02:40 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 03-02-2017, 03:14 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 03-11-2017, 06:42 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 03-22-2017, 08:32 AM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by The Blackguard - 03-24-2017, 09:57 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by St.Denis - 04-15-2017, 04:11 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by thisDerius - 04-15-2017, 07:42 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by thisDerius - 04-16-2017, 09:52 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by thisDerius - 04-21-2017, 01:26 AM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by St.Denis - 04-23-2017, 01:02 PM

RE: [BG]- The Blackguard - by thisDerius - 04-23-2017, 03:33 PM

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