Shelco's Feedback

[Shelco]

Well, if you can call it feedback: I personally think that the character reference pictures for your female characters are, on average, way too beautiful (except Monroe, which is good). It might sound like a strange thing to say, but consider that a roleplay environment is supposed to mirror reality in the universe you are playing in, and there will always be standards for what is beautiful and what is not. Granted, in the future, there might be affordable plastic surgery stuff and whatnot, but consider that we only have our own impressions from the time we, as the players, live in, and seeing characters that barely look old enough to leave high school can be quite jarring. This is a criticism completely divorced from your quality of roleplay, which is good, but merely my two cents upon seeing the feedback page.

In regards to your roleplay: I never truly read everything that a single person is writing and contain myself to specific things, but when I did look into your writing, specifically your BDM stuff, it was always nice.

Awww :3 I mean, yeah I totally agree with you but young characters leave more dynamics of roleplay that is why I use them, I don't know if I had the same fun with older ones. The rest blends in from the overall faction orientation with the character looking apart from the age. Monroe is a Xeno and so I thought something rough and dirty would fit and taddaaa there she is. Florence is a noble and yet unaffiliated, Lena just became a Freelancer and Belen is perfect imo. This young char thing is just a personal preference of mine but I agree with you

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