I would like to discuss following things. I will speak on behalf of Commune.
Your lore write up is fine. However, I'm interested to see how do you actually "play the role" in game. It came to my concern because, as I was reviewing your reporting thread, and your reports, it seemed like you "instantly knew" about Commune and whom they are.
I was really questioning myself when your character, Tia Stormclaw all of sudden "hated" Nomak and Commune. You even stated that in two communications, one to The Brotherhood and one to Reavers and you asked them for cooperation because, your character apparently "hates" them. They seemed to ignore though, perhaps due to insufficient knowledge on what your group actually does?
We were discussing this in our skype group chat and we were really wondering, from where all this came from? We do not recall we had any interactions with Tia Stormclaw before you putted on [BG] tag, and as soon as you did, you begun with your "stance".
Why? Well, perhaps Blackguard is pretty new faction, but I remember that when Samarran Raiders were as well, new faction, and our lore stated that "we worship" Nomads, we still had to kiss their asses for like, two years, until they acknowledged our RP? We couldn't get straight to point of aliance and all that joint fighting stuff.
Until then, we were Slavers and Pirates. We were slowly building up our way toward what Commune today is. That path took us roughly six years. Six real years. And not even once being official too.
We'd like to see more material that would justify your actual and initiative "hate" stance (any kind of reports, communications). As you can see from some of your reports, Nomak and Hussaini actualy approached to your member, and we questioned him, even if we actually knew, OORP-ly, what do you do and who you are.
