I think its missing something.. Oh yeah. Its the part about how you get the Outcasts to pay you to kill the BHG in the FIRST place.. Its all well and good to use the fact that you are to stop current OC from shooting you.. But why the the OC have you do it in the first place? They would go; "Urghhh... BH guns... bad ship... we hate you.. killlllll" I believe it was. No matter how you spin it, your in the wrong, your breaking rules on your own, and trying to cast the blame for this OORP crap on others when its responsibility rests solely on your shoulders.
Your story needs to serious tweaking. Such as the fact that your either; No longer flying a Spatial with BHG guns (that you still haven't explained why you have them.. But any of the other explanations didn't really explain anything either..) or; Your no longer working for the Outcasts. No matter what, they two cannot be combined. This is a Role Play server, not a 'Lonetiger gets to do whatever he wants' server. Lastly; Did you read ANY of my first post? Maybe you should, or just re-read it, as you seem to have missed the points made in it.
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