There are a few things I would like for you to modify:
- Color the rings around the system circles as denoted by the "Region Ring Marker" color in the first spoiler of the original post, using the same systems set down in the rules and/or @Error's NavMap. So for example, Leeds and Edinburgh should still have a medium red region ring, while inside the medium purple bubble. You may use a slightly different "medium" shade than the House Government's bubble if that is needed for contrast and visual appeal - this part is up to you.
- Filled in system circles for the contested systems looks neat, but showing regional (rather than political) affiliation through the ring around the edge of the circle is still important, so try showing that for them as well, if possible.
- Bretonia owns the other half of Cortez through the Treaty of Curacao.
- See if you can clip off the left-most portion of Imperial Kusari space, which is empty, as well as a small slice of the left part of Crayter's territory around Tau-44. This is currently shows a bunch of empty space as belonging to the IKN, exaggerating their control a little bit, and we could extend the no-man's zone down from Tau-37 by a little bit, alongside 44.
- The bubbles in general are great, and I like how they fit together. Perhaps experiment a little with rounding some of the corners in various places, especially for sharper angled corners where they don't hit systems, for example right beneath Dresden. If it doesn't look right, that's fine, but I think it's worth trying.
If you would like, you can add me on Skype (found on my profile) to discuss details further.
