BD battleship. Abandoned

[Croft]

Superb work on the details as per usual Swallow. I don't know if it's just my eyes but the various lines of the model seem a bit disjointed, particularly around the centre. For example, the middle of the hull slants downwards while the "building" on the top appears to pointing upwards despite being level, something made even more apparent by the large rectangle just beneath. Though not bad looking it makes it awkward to find the common "line" on the model as it where, at least to me anyway.

I'd suggest leveling out the centre by a few degrees, if not making it level entirely or alternatively breaking up the large rectangle into the same slats of armour that are between it and the begining of the bow (front).

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