=SoW= Solitude of War

[Heartless]

Well then,

I actually think it's ok, but there are some things that make no sence to me and need serioues re-thinking.

First off, this is not where you post this, it should go to the "faction creation request", not the feedback thread.
-You said "Enough to commence construction on more warships. Although painfully slow, the Order fleets began to expand." This isn't quite true. The Order is still small and too under-manned to produce ships at this scale. Ships that are produced are so by Bs| and indies with role-play reasons.
-I don't get the Pirate ID thing still, the ID regulations of the Pirate don't fit with the ID regulations of the Order and criss-crossing them makes no sence either
-Adding such a "Dom'Kavash" prison system seems kinda too far out of the box
-Everything you say you would do, fight Nomads, bounty hunters etc. is what Bs| does.
-Wrecked weapons? No way, you can't have liberty fighter guns in an Order ship
-Weapons sold on civilian bases? Define "civilian bases". And that could include everything from outcast to rheinland weapons
-Salvaged Nomad weaponry. Don't just salvage it, explain how you are going to use it and how you figured out you even can use them.
-Your Reputation needs some serious work.
-You also said "training programs will be a regular thing and so will the pirate runs". Pirate as the Order? That's a big nono and very un-rp of the Order to do. It's also not something the Order would ever do.
-You also said "watching our old friends get slowly torn apart from several warzone fronts". The Order doesn't go on full-out war, creating "battlefronts" etc. We don't have near the manpower to do that. So your purposes needs serious re-thinking
-You also said "ID: Pirate (Except Cruiser + Battleship who are Order - Rules tell me to)" You make that sound like a bad thing and as if you would pirate in a battleship too if you had the chance.
-For gunboat and cruiser/destroyer class ships, you'll also need good RP reasons to fly those and approval from the factions that build said ship.
-You pirating will make you look bad from the eyes of other Order ships and pilots and will not feel good towards you and might lead tooa power-struggle or civil war.

Now, I can sence a power struggle coming. You have a rank of "Fleet Admiral" and "Vice Admiral", now the Order has it's leader (Dboy) and 4 "official" admirals, those in Bs|. There will be struggles when both factions are in space, and you must know Bs| will always hold more power. Go look at our faction recruitment. In the past week we've had like 8 new members apply, I've never seen so much, and I have no doubt Disco members joined because of the trouble with OTF. We get support from our community and that's something that's just price-less, you can't ask for anything better from a great community like this one.

All in all, you sound like you want to do what Bs| and independant Order ships and pilots already do. This will just cause problems and will end in another civil war. We've had how many... like 4, 5 other Order factions attempt at approval? All have been shut down. The Order is frankly too small to be shared by more than 1 player factions, and again, it will only cause problems.

I don't know why new factions loaded with members come from other servers thinking they can rule supreme, but that is blasphemy. This is Discovery, not just some other server, things matter here, and you won't be able to barge in and expect immediate approval.

Take all of this into consideration, I don't want another Civil war.

-SwissScorch

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