Keepstar Research Group // Faction Information

[Laz]

While the write up is nicely structured, I'd suggest against using so much of one colour - or perhaps shrinking the font size? Currently, at least in my opinion, it looks a tad to "in your face" if you take my meaning.

Consider the Following

➧Faction overview

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“Keepstar” is a research group created in 824 A.S, regarding event occurs in Omicron Delta:

“824 AS, REPORT FROM OMICRON DELTA - A major cosmic event has occurred in the Omicrons, marking a date where the orbit around the MEDIUM RED solar in the Delta System has become one inhabitant sparser. Reports say that the asteroid known as 891-GAAL has, as descriptions state, disintegrated in its orbit around the star. Scientists cannot yet specify the cause of this calamity, but guesses include its irregular orbit passing too close to Planet Vaitupu, experimental weapons testing and, of course, the involvement of the Core, Order or even the alien presence in those systems.
Whatever the leading causes are, there are already reports that the resulting FIELD contains rich amounts of various ores, some of which are believed to be highly rare, while others - highly useful.”
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➧Faction overview

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“Keepstar” is a research group created in 824 A.S, regarding event occurs in Omicron Delta:

“824 AS, REPORT FROM OMICRON DELTA - A major cosmic event has occurred in the Omicrons, marking a date where the orbit around the MEDIUM RED solar in the Delta System has become one inhabitant sparser. Reports say that the asteroid known as 891-GAAL has, as descriptions state, disintegrated in its orbit around the star. Scientists cannot yet specify the cause of this calamity, but guesses include its irregular orbit passing too close to Planet Vaitupu, experimental weapons testing and, of course, the involvement of the Core, Order or even the alien presence in those systems.
Whatever the leading causes are, there are already reports that the resulting FIELD contains rich amounts of various ores, some of which are believed to be highly rare, while others - highly useful.”
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