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Even though previously I'd start terribly written stories and never finish them, I really want to show the community that I can construct engaging arcs and create characters with depth. My GCSE A grade literacy must mean something.

NAME	PICTURE	BIOGRAPHY	STORIES
Nathan Archos	Spoiler	Spoiler A ruthless man driven by manipulated emotions and insecurity. His love for Evelyn Sharp makes him willing to do whatever it takes to bring her back, no matter how dangerous, consequential or irrational.	---------------------
Epsilon	Spoiler	Spoiler A veteran of the Battle of the Omicron Minor. Or is he? An amnesia sufferer, Epsilon has served The Core for as long as he can remember. But what he doesn't know is what haunts him. Can you even feel alive if you don't even know who you are?	Spoiler Ad Infinitum - Nodtviet's last few hours, Epsilon questions his own existence and Nova tries to catch the killer.
Nova Hawken	Spoiler	Spoiler A disgraced ex-LPI officer turned chief Core torturer and ruthless Sentinel. Nova's brutality is a projection of her own fragmented pscyhe; inflicting pain on others to cover her own pain.	---------------------
Luc LeMarsh	Soon™	Spoiler A once famed Privateer, Luc seeks retribution by bringing the Union Corse to justice and getting vengence for his fallen Gallic Junker brothers and sisters. To achieve this, he has joined the Marine Royale Gaulois. Ulterior motives include pursuing the Crown itself through an intricate game of F/M/K.	Spoiler Fantome - Luc LeMarsh walks the lonely road of vengeance amidst discrimination and adversity.
Zoe Valentine	Spoiler	Spoiler A lazy, but sweet girl who cares deeply for Liberty and the Navy she serves.	---------------------
Jack "Snake Eyes" McMaverick	Soon™	Spoiler This mercenary's greed got the better of him, leading to his eventual infection at the hands of the Aoi Iseijin. Suffering from Schizophrenia prior to his infestation, the incubi has now brought this out in full force. When the alien speaks through him, it cycles through his many voices, leaving his victims terrified and confused about who - or what - they may be dealing with.	---------------------
Cole D. Steele	Spoiler	Spoiler A mysterious man with an even more mysterious past. It's a mystery how this mystery man can be shrouded in such mystery. But then again, what is a good mystery without mystery? // Cole is part of my attempt to make more comedic writings, and to hopefully brighten up the gloomy universe of Freelancer Discovery. Please tell me if I'm not funny, so that I can quit my career whilst I'm ahead.	---------------------

Dead/Retierd Characters:
Erik Nodtviet - Dead
George Masters and his Crew - Retired
Probably mnay others I've forgotten lmao.

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