|=DSS=| Officialdom request

[Deep Space Solutions]

I, actually, wish you to RP something else, except shipping materials or keeping your POB alive, like you do now. I would expect something like Cold Lake from DSE- faction, attempting to get an officialdom.
Also, as for me, some of your ID lines are senseless, like:
>- Can engage in piracy against corporations affiliated with houses at war with Liberty anywhere.
But
>- Can attack ships, except for Hellfire Legion, belonging to houses or organisations considered hostile by Liberty within their Zone of Influence.
First of all, these two lines don't fit each other.
Secondly, you are an industrial corporation, why do you need to have an opportunity to engage in pirace? Do you have any RP behind it? It sounds like powergaming. Please, remove.
Also, I'm a bit confused by your goals. TLDR it's "Mine ore and deliver materials". You don't look like a faction with interesting RP opportunities at all.
And, finally, you could use someone help with graphics and BB-codes, because, well, it isn't a good example of design.
At least, you are pretty active, but that's not enough.
I don't want to see the officialdom of this faction for now. Probably, I will change my opinion, if something changes.
Anyway, despite this fact, I wish you a good luck.
EDITED: I don't like story as well, being honest. May be it's just me.
Also:
This Liberty Government decision forces Mr. Gunsmith to create a new company called Deep Space Mining with headquarters on Elysium station. All of the assets, ships and equipment are transferred there as well and the workers are finally satisfied, their new and bright future is about to begin………
And don't use so many dots at the end of each pargraph, please.
EDITED 2:
Also your diplomacy is missing something like 85% of other factions.

Deep Space Solutions

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1st. we are not only shiping materials or only keeping our base alive. We construct Cloaking Devices, explore space with an Explorer ship and we also do repairs for the others with our Repair Drones.
2nd. FYI the cold lake project is being, or at least tried to be done and pushed for 2 years now?? so much for trying. DSE has 2 members and one of them is only interested in attacking anyone it sees. Dont get me wrong i wish all the best for DSE, but face it, its a long dead faction.
3rd. Let me copy paste you a DSE ID NPC faction:

Deep Space Engineering is a Liberty industrial corporation which specialises in heavy industry and shipbuilding. They partner with Universal Shipping and Ageira Technologies. Deep Space Engineering is responsible for building and maintaining Trade Lanes and Jump Gates using Ageira's technologies.

Pilot carrying this lawful ID is an employee of Deep Space Engineering, who:

Can attack any ship in self-defense, to protect an allied or neutral lawful ship, or in defense of a base of the same affiliation, both within and outside of their Zone of Influence.
Can attack ships belonging to houses or organisations considered hostile by Liberty within their Zone of Influence.
Can attack Lane Hackers anywhere.
Can engage in piracy against corporations affiliated with houses at war with Liberty anywhere.
Cannot ally with any unlawfuls.
Cannot participate in unlawful actions except as described above.

Zone of Influence: Liberty

Allowed ships: Fighters, Freighters, Transports, Gunboats

So this is it, if you see a fault, maybe you should talk to the devs and admins, so the can correct this mistake as you see it. Where is the RP for piracy for DSE generic ID??

Also you ask where is the RP behind us being able to ally with Hellfire Legion??? Maybe you should reed the links i posted bellow, you will find more than enough RP supported.
4th. As for the BB code and graphical choices i made for the request, beauty is in the eye of the beholder my friend. Someones liking is another man's dislike. Im sorry you dont like it but thats the way it is.

5th. If you dont see us as an interesting faction to RP with, this is also your loss, im sure we shall find many others that are actually interestaed in RPing with us.

6th. Im also sorry you dont like the story, but this also differs from person to person as i have been contacted by people praising my story, and its also true(RP wise).
Dots at the end of paragaphs??? if you dont know, let me help you out a bit.
Dots mean a time overlap, a jump with a story where a reader may use his imagination to finalize as he sees fitting. Also it represents an unfinished chapter of something that is about top begin. It is a legitimate thing used in many SF books and Adventure novels.
Writters use it to make a point, where something unknown lingers........