Goliath's lil Feedback thread.(//WIP)

[Goliath]

(// I will one day regret this but its definitely not anytime soon.)

Goliath's Feedback Thread

I do ingame based roleplay mainly.

Hit me up with suggestions and so on.

Main Characters

Kyle Vaughn
Dover Vaughn
Ivan VonClaussen
Johan Rasch
Logan Hussar
Ernesto Aguado
"Unidentified" alien Scimmys

Short infos:

+Kyle Vaughn and Dover Vaughn- Both brothers, they grew in Puerto Rico together for 20 years. Kyle, the bigger brother has left the Junker Family for a life full of adventures while Dover kept on with the Junkers. They have re-united after two years of divergence. Now they are both billionaires after a good while of trading and services using The Black Liner, a refitted Pilgrim Liner flying under the Junker IFF.

+Ivan VonClaussen and Johan Rasch- Close friends, they are in command of RNC-Krauss, the wanderer Bismarck. They have close relations to Kyle and Dover. Both were on the first line of defense in the Liberty-Rheinland war aboard Krauss.

+Logan Hussar- Born on California Minor, Logan grew under the influence of his parents, and soon became obsessed with Nomads. After years of researching and struggles to know their secrets, he ended up fried by enemy vessels in Omicron Delta as an Oracle. He now lives in a struggle of his own made prison. A suit that slowly attempts at Logan's mind.

+Ernesto Aguado- Traditional Corsair born on Planet Crete. He has left for ORG together with his Titan. The main reason he left the Empire was mainly due to his poor origins, and his greedyness to a better life.

+Unidentified Scimitars and other Ships- Unknown vessels spotted in most of the Houses. Containing Human, Nomad and other tissues of unknown origin, are hostile to humans and nomads alike. Their only goal is to serve their Mother and Hivemind alike. It is known that the ships once belonged to unfortunate civilians that met the parasites in their tiniest form. It is likely that they are to evolve, however only Light Fighters were spotted.


-Note:
*No stale memes please. I made this thread in order to use your feedback as a correction factor, and perfect my RP.

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