Nodoka Hanamura - RP Feedback Thread

[Nodoka Hanamura]

Okay, so.. I'm planning on giving Seraphine (my capital ship) a SRP ID for the sake of preparing myself for a custom ship SRP down the line.

As such, I'm needing advice on IDs - I made a rudimentary ID with Rephacks and reasons for said rephacks.

Thoughts, comments and suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Spoiler

The vessel carrying this ID is the CS Abdicant Seraphine, a Ex-Zoner ship, which:

-Can attack Kusari State Police and Kusari Naval Forces vessels within Kusari.
-Can Pirate transports within Kusari carrying a Kishiro, KNF or KSP ID.
-Can attack Order and GRN anywhere.
-Can attack ships in self defence, are hostile to her crew or in defense of allies of the ship's Commander, Nodoka Hanamura.
-Can attack Wild, Nomad, and any ships equipped with Nomad equipment anywhere.
-Cannot participate in unlawful actions except as described above.
-Cannot dock on Valravn Citadel as per in-RP docking restrictions.
-Allowed ships: Aquilon

Rephacks:
-1 - KUSARI STATE POLICE - Wanted for many criminal violations, Nodoka is marked as shoot on sight by all Kusari State actors.
-1 - KEMPEITAI - See above.
-1 - KUSARI NAVAL FORCES - See above.
-1 - KISHIRO TECHNOLOGIES - Partly responsible for Nodoka being 'stolen' from her family and afterwards, leaving her with barely anything, Nodoka seeks revenge against the company for their wrongful acts against her. Kishiro also seeks to recover Honya and Pale Bride, as they were stolen by Nodoka as well, during her flight from Kusari.
-1 - ORDER - One of many Banes of Nodoka's existance, the Order is a jaded version of the one she was told of by Kishiro during her education. Nodoka and the crew of the Abdicant Seraphine are vehemently opposed to Michal Golanski and those under his command.
-1 - GALLIC ROYAL NAVY - With Nodoka's connections to both Sirius and the Council, Gallia has her listed as one of millions of wanted persons who have committed crimes against the Roi.
-1 - GALLIC ROYAL POLICE - See Above.
-1 - GALLIC ROYAL INTELLIGENCE - See Above.
-1 - OUTCASTS - Vehemently hostile to the Outcasts, and unknown by them, the Outcasts are outright hostile.
-1 - BOUNTY HUNTERS - Wanted by Kusari State Police and Kishiro Technologies, the Bounty Hunters have been out for Nodoka's head since her escape from Kusari years ago.
-0.55 - SAMURA INDUSTRIES - Although Samura is a lawful entity, they generally ignore Nodoka due to their cold war with Kishiro. However, to save face, Nodoka is not permitted to dock Seraphine on Samura bases.
-0.55 - ZONER GUARD - Due to Nodoka's actions in defying Zoner ideologies, Livadia Shipyard (and other Zoner Guard installations) refuses to service the Seraphine whatsoever.
0.0 - HOGOSHA - Nodoka's loose connection with Hogosha member Akira Kiyoshi has yet to bear fruit in regards to Hogosha's disposition to Nodoka.
0.0 - MAQUIS - Although allied with the Council, the Maquis do not have experience with Nodoka to justify any disposition.
0.0 - UNIONE CORSE - The Unione Corse have yet to encounter the Seraphine or her Crew.
0.0 - BLOOD DRAGONS - Although her dealings via Honya with the Blood Dragons have been somewhat favorable, it has not been effective in changing their disposition with her.
0.0 - GOLDEN CHRYSANTHEMUMS - The Chrysanthemums do not look favorably or unfavorably upon Nodoka, mainly due to her lack of experience with them, and her legal status in Kusari.
0.2 - JUNKERS - Nodoka's initial dealings with the Junkers, as well as her relationship with Kyle Vaughn, has gotten her into a slightly favorable position in Junker Society.
0.4 - THE COUNCIL - Nodoka's past working with the Council before her Adminisration at Freeport 11 has led to her maintaining a favorable presence working with the Council in their battle against the Roi.
0.4 - ZONERS - Nodoka's time at Freeport 11 has garnered her a small following in Zoner Society, and her Administration at Freeport 11 being generally positively recieved.
0.6 - AUXESIA - Nodoka's relationship with Keeper Joshua "Leviathan" Hunt and general support of Auxesia has led to her and Honya both being members of the Covenant of Auxo, the Civilian counterpart of Auxesia.

IFF: NONE

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