Although there is some use to listing things to do, it's more something to help new people rather than vets. Overall, I'd make the format shorter (use as few words as possible and drop things like "install the mod").
I agree with "It's better to now make it as easy as possible for people" when it comes to learning the game and lore, but disagree when this concerns ship building. The easier it is to make a ship, the more worthless it feels for the player. Games like Freelancer have gradual ship building as central source of fun. Unfortunately discovery has completely killed this by making boring credit grinds (and SRPs which are exceptions and not the norm) pretty much the only ship building progression.