|O| - The Order (Legacy of Orillion)

[Kalhmera]

Good luck, a new Order faction has been a long time coming. One thing I want to mention though regarding your ID:

"- Can engage Nomads, Wilde, House Intel Factions, The Core, Bounty Hunters and any ships equipped with Nomad-based technology."

A. It's WILD, not 'Wilde' - unless you only care about shooting Das Wilde, and not Aoi.
B. I guess you could chalk it up to historical issues, but I'd say at this point it doesn't make a lot of sense for Order to be so-hostile-to-the-BHG-they-hunt-them-down-sirius-wide. The reason why it exists on the (outdated) current Order ID is more because of the old relationship between BHG and Core. Either way, just putting that out there.
C. Technically you don't really need that line at all. Your ID already covers shooting all of those targets anywhere with its first line, as the Order ID doesn't have ZoI.

Thanks brother, Going to make amendments now. Much appreciated!

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