In all honesty, I kind of like the rep chart. It's unnecessary, sure, but it's different and if anything, aesthetically pleasing. Everything else on the page seems dreary in comparison.
Other than a few grammatical and spelling errors, reasonably self explanatory. I agree with Kahl and I feel you've over done the blurry thing. It's public OORP knowledge of your faction, not some vague comms post shrouded in secrecy.
If you intend to make a presence in the Liberty black market, you are going to want to approach both the Hackers and the Rogues to make sure that you guys understand each other. The Rogues don't do competition and the Hackers don't trust anyone. Otherwise you'll end up being pestered by Rogues and unable to use their facilities and their ties in the already well established black market brokered by the Junkers. If your faction goal is to take over the black market, I think it's cool and 100% support your factions ideology. But a word from the wise, do not let the Rogues find out that is your intention. Try establishing some decent relations before your take over attempt.
Other wise, I like it. I think you have what it takes. Good luck!