[Feedback/mod thread for Unioner advertisement post]

[Enkidu]

And I'm not even going to mention how your tl;dr is bigger than a good amount of faction pages. If you wanna get people's attention, reading huge horribly formatted texts wont get you it. It wont get you any more RP'ers. What you need is a neatly structured list of what you are offering / able to offer people for joining. Whether that be opportunities or monetary incentives or whatever.

All really good advice. I'll do that.

Consider this thread somewhere where you can give pointers to make this post better for when it goes up in the dedicated subforum.

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