[MQS] The Maquis

[Laz]

A few notes from me.

I would suggest reworking a lot of your formatting as it really feels like an eyesore currently. Certain things are indented incorrectly, the text is large, in your face, and just a tad too blinding.
Like @Rantari, I would suggest removing ships that you cannot fly as well as those you can but haven't really done the RP to be able to use.
There are also a few instances of broken or malformed English within your writeup, and I suggest a second look.

I also think, given your conduct to this point, it's rather soon to be pursuing officialdom. Gallic groups probably have it as one of the hardest to get official due to how the region is and its activity, and from what I've seen thus far, this group seems to lack a bit of control and the ability to process feedback with a controlled manner. From my experiences in game, and from what I've seen on the forums, you're extremely defensive about pretty much everything.

Just my two cents.

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