Feedback - Gallia Triumphant

[Capt. Henry Morgan]

Name-catchy. Draws me to read in instant as soon i sow it at right side of forum ,
Story-interesting and detailed enough, but without owerwelming and boring flood of info,
Plot twist with Steward - quite unexpected,

Looking forward to see what you prepared next . Dont change a thing in this concept ,it is great , just keep it coming!

(Only story here i aleady subscribed few hours ago ,that shuld tell you clear enough isnt lol ?)

I'm glad you're enjoying it! I've pretty much been making this up as I go along, so I'm open to suggestions on where to go next. For the whole Steward twist, I knew I wanted Lord Mountbatten to give the Gauls a big, public middle finger. I know the title he chose isn't a traditional British or Bretonian title, but that was intentional. I like to think that art and literature from Earth was preserved and survived the exodus from Sol. Things like The Lord of the Rings would hold a place in their culture not unlike the place that books like the Illiad and the Odyssey hold in ours. So it makes sense that an educated man like Lord Mountbatten would pull a Tolkien reference out of his arse in a situation like that, when he was speaking off the cuff with no prior planning.

I'm not sure where the story is going next, so if you or anyone else has any suggestions, I'm all ears.