I'd like to see a side-by-side of the Rancor next to either the Guardian or Eagle. I mostly like the initial design, but it looks really long from the top and bottom view; it feels more SHF than VHF to me right now. Maybe the shape of the vessel is throwing off my perspective?
I think the mouth is super rad and fits the decade-old snake theme. I also enjoy the web-like armor designs on the wings. As for the wing design themselves-- Huh, they almost look like crab claws when looking straight down at the ship? But! I notice that the wings have some hollow struts that make them look like pincers or spider legs coming together, which is definitely unique, in a refreshing way imo.
So far, it's coming together nicely! I'm looking forward to seeing the further tweaks that have been mentioned previously.
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