This is Discovery

[Hubjump]

The fast blacking out of the screen hurts my head as bad as flashing white would. But I do already have a headache atm.
Hmm... To be scary it needs some kind of... Scale...

That ishtar/old marduk seemed small and not so threatening whilst the scare theme without any clouds or anything to suggest it's actually got a reason to not be seen...
I don't know just the fact it was there with nothing hiding it and was small made it lose impact.

You could super scale the marduk model and effects on a singleplayer client possibly and try and record it in some kind of light cloud maybe.
Also maybe hide the hud and put the cockpit in after overlaying some makeshift cloud since the cockpit is rather fixed is it not?