(]c[) Zoners Trading Consortium

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I agree with three points already raised here:

1. Vindication policies are not the way Zoners have ever operated

2. A full integrated military lead by an "Admiralty" is not the way trading factions operate (escort wing yes, but not an active military with an Admiralty Board)

3. Your faction proposal would be far better suited if you were affiliated with a House Corporation, e.g. Universal, rather than the already over-used and abused Zoners.

That said, the proposal is by and large sensible and well written; I just feel that if the above points were addressed (or at least satisfactorily explained) then it would be an altogether much more solid looking proposal.

Just renaming your "Admirals" to "Security Wing Commanders" and changing some of the wording would make a big difference in my eyes.

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Sir Stanley Nelson




<span style="color:#000066">Charles Canning </span><span style="color:#000066"> Foreign Secretary</span>