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It's looking good Kane. The Half-life 2 engine seems to be pretty excellent for machinima, it will be interesting to see where this story goes :0)

A couple of points of creative criticism (if you don't mind, of course) - maybe try a different font, all the windows default ones are quite ugly especially for comics. A very good source for some font styles to give it a more professional look are available from Blambot.com, I believe quite a few free ones are offered. And the other thing was frame edges, it can be difficult to see where one picture ends and another begins when there's an abundance of dark colours. Perhaps try outlining every other frame, or just the inset ones with a thin white border to make it really stand out.

Hope that helps, I'm anticipating how this develops and unfolds in future installments :0)

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