ID formatting

[Karlotta]

I'd go with option 2 if you changed this

[Example] is the [House] covert operations service, who specialise in spying and sabotage outside of [House] space.

The pilot carrying this quasi-lawful Intelligence ID is a member of the [Example], who:

Within ZOI:
- Can enforce the laws of [House].

Anywhere:
- Can attack combat ships and pirate trade ships which belong to organisations considered hostile by [House], anywhere.
- Can demand Azurite Gas and Nomad Remains from any ship.
- Can attack ships which belong to non-allied Intelligence groups.

Outside ZOI:
- Can only attack in self-defense when using cruisers.

General:
- Can ally with unlawful factions.
- Cannot use any transports with more than 4,300 cargo.

Zone of Influence: Systems
Allowed ships: Fighters, Freighters, Transports, Gunboats, Cruisers

to this:

[Example] is the [House] covert operations service, which specializes in spying and sabotage outside of [House] space.

Player characters using this quasi-lawful Intelligence ID are members of the [Example], who can:

- use Fighters, Freighters, Gunboats, Cruisers, and Transports with up to 4300 cargo space
- attack combat ships and pirate trade ships which belong to organisations considered hostile by [House], anywhere
- attack ships which belong to non-allied Intelligence groups
- demand Azurite Gas and Nomad Remains from any ship
- ally with unlawful factions

WITHIN their ZOI (systems), they can:
- enforce the laws of [House].

OUTSIDE their ZOI:
- cruisers can only attack in self-defense.

- changed wordings/spellings in red
- re-ordered to anywhere, insidezoi ,outside
- merged "general" with "everywhere" and dropped the class name to save a line
- joined lines of zoi list with zoi mention
- joined transport cargo limitation with " allowed ships" line
- moved ship restrictions to the top because that's the first thing who get the ID needs to know
- replaced "Outside ZOI: - Can only attack in self-defense when using cruisers" with
" Outside their ZOI: - Cruisers can only attack in self-defense" because the former could be understood to mean self defense isnt allowed unless you're flying a cruiser outside your zoi
- added words like "their" to make sentences more grammatically correct
- capitalized WITHIN and OUTSIDE for emphasis
- removed repetitions of "can" at the beginning of bulletpoints if it made things more clear

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