I really liked this, wish there was a Corsair similar one. The most notable things for me is that there isn't "separatist" feelings for being from a certain group of hipanics/european descendants (something that every corsair factions I saw have and to be honest I'm not very much into it, I mean for the ones like me who likes the classic lore), and ultimate, the information is very clear and brief, there's a lot of space to experiment with individual RP and stuff (it's a fact at least from my point of view that because of a closed background certain factions don't have much room for RP inside and outisde their ZoI). Buen trabajo!
