In all honesty I found it difficult to read your faction info page. Its just a wall of text. Best advice I can give you is to look at other faction info pages and try to come up with your own version. Something that explains who and what you are. Pictures, fonts, and colors go a long way to making your readers interested.
Just as the constant increase of entropy is the basic law of the universe, so it is the basic law of life to struggle against entropy. - V. Havel
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