Golden Chrysanthemum Gen'an Cell - Feedback

[WesternPeregrine]

Recent evaluation on the faction:

To praise:

Keeps adding new members to their roster. People feel the faction appeal and wish to join.

To keep:

Faction keeps a constant activity, and a diversity(?) of activities puts them in space. Sometime in opposition to other groups, sometimes on their own or visiting allies.

To improve upon:

Some, if not all of the characters are shallow. Seems most of the members (the new members perhaps?) just read the three goals stated on the faction info, and weaves a small set of life concepts that hit all 3 at the same time, no matter how unlikely the odds of that happening more than once are. Then they write a wordy paragraph to dissimulate those key goals as if they were part of a larger backstory.
Everyone hates men, every single one was abused or bullied for being a woman (or fat, I don't really know), and everyone is a "hardcore rebel" who wishes to "destroy the patriarchy" and the corporations and then... ??
Maybe the setting of Kusari is lacking. It makes it seem that the characters are part of a self-made "oppressed" minority though. Breaking the mold on some would be advised.

I guess I give it a 4 stars out of 5. It's a fairly good faction, but it's still not the best it can potentially be.

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