(03-17-2021, 07:27 AM)Shimamori Wrote: You have my kudos for the lore. A good read. I would only suggest to remove the "barbarians" part from your highest rank - it implicitly refers to Kusarians as "barbarians", i.e. you are calling yourself barbarians unless you distance yourself from your Kusarian origins. The kanji refer to the period of Japanese history when the shogun was chairing campaigns against the Ainu people, who were barbarians in Japanese image. Needless to say, the main target of the BD are other Kusarians of the same culture, so simply "Shogun" (将軍) might suffice.
Gotcha, makes sense. I'll make the adjustment. Edit: Wanted to say I'm glad you like the lore! I was feeling pretty self-conscious about it so I'm happy someone likes it.
