Want to read? Bored? I need some feedback

[Fletcher]

Since I have no clue whether I am writing or heading in the right direction with the stories I have written here to roleplay with, I have had very little to no feedback on them. I would love to see what you think about them. Post about them here since they are in their respective sub-forum. Links included.:)

Colonel Edison Trent, after the Nomad War - Put new chapter in.

Slater, A new Bounty Hunter - A Gunship is on order, once I get one, I'll be writing up a story on it.

The Sentinel, Result of the LASP at Willard Reasearch - I'm currently using this ship actively, its hard to type quickly and in the 'computerized' fashion before a certain criminal tries to blow me up without saying a word... I'd love feedback on this one.:yes:

They're all a wall of text, especially the Slater one, I put a lot of effort into him.:)

Thanks in advance.:yahoo:

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