Just sat down and read the lot - all except the Jason moore one.
The Zacarius story is good, it gets you in, how it ties in with Carina is nicely done - my only downer? how you ended it! the Carina conflict could have been so much more fleshed out, there was a lot in that, and then you unceremoniously killed one of your main characters.... I liked the story up till that point; when i read it i could suppress an "awww man!?" All in all though, cool story. And i liked the mix in with Eppy's parts as well.
Light as a feather... nice idea, a mix of star trek voyager meets BSG meets freelancer, like to see where you take it, and its nice to see other forum members involved as well, it adds the the story. Will continue to watch it as it progresses
You posted four new ones - Esther, Karly, Eddy Tamotsu. Easy to read but i think really lack the detail and character development you put into your others, dont really get a feel for these people, some of the stories read as explanations for having codenames, which is fair enough, but a bit dry. - with the exception of Karly... an alcoholic ship captain who seems to sleep with all of her crew... including the 16 yr old helmsmen (begs the question how old is Karly? its a rare woman over 25 who'll go near a 16 yr old boy!). Interesting to see how dysfunctional that crew can become!:)
All in all, prolific stuff and good to read, keep it up! Enjoyed reading them all and ill continue to do so.
