Your RP sucks - here are some tips to make it better

[Thunderer]

I like some of these, but I think it's important not to forget that this is a guide how to make your RP better according to Corile. There is no absolute standard for writing and that's what makes it fun. When you write, you are free.

However, I disagree with two points. While I agree that writing RP is a good way to improve your English, I don't think it should be the reason why you would improve it. I don't mind when the English is creaky, especially if the writer is not a native speaker, as long as whatever is written is comprehensible. What matters is the story, language is only a medium that conveys it. If it conveys it, it works. Also, I think that "show, don't tell" is more of a film technique rather than one desirable in literature. I myself prefer the opposite in books, but I agree that it works better in motion pictures.

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