Deterrence OF application

[Corile]

I agree with most of what Megaera said before. To be honest I haven't had extensive experience with your players in game but from what I experienced back in October (replying to an iRP local chat with oorp pm) it is clear you are very new.

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[05.10.2021 14:51:24] C::Kosti'Zografou: Kalimera, gentlemen.
[05.10.2021 14:51:36] DTR-xxx: Greetings
[05.10.2021 14:51:55] C::Kosti'Zografou: DTR? First time I see your lot.
[05.10.2021 14:52:02] C::Kosti'Zografou: Who are you?
[05.10.2021 14:53:15] C::Kosti'Zografou: Hm?
[05.10.2021 14:54:40] C::Kosti'Zografou: Uh, some bunch of mutes. Fantastic.
[05.10.2021 14:54:51] DTR-xxx: Is there something ya need mate?
[05.10.2021 14:55:02] C::Kosti'Zografou: Oh, I've just politely asked who you are.
[05.10.2021 14:55:19] DTR-xxx: We are Deterrance
[05.10.2021 14:55:37] C::Kosti'Zografou: I see. That didn't explain much but fair enough.
[05.10.2021 14:56:26] DTR-xxx: just like the other factions we too created one well to create balance in the house of sirius
[05.10.2021 14:56:38] DTR-xxx: our roles are simple
[05.10.2021 14:56:50] DTR-xxx: we attack any unlawful to us
[05.10.2021 14:57:09] DTR-xxx: and pirate any one who is ungreateful
[05.10.2021 14:57:12] DTR-xxx: meaning hostile
[05.10.2021 14:57:37] DTR-xxx: if u wanna know more and clearly u can have a chat with penumbra
[05.10.2021 14:57:45] DTR-xxx: she can explain ya hwat ye need :)

It doesn't seem to me like you particularly know much about Discovery. You don't seem know much about the lore. You don't appear to know anything about the Corsairs. Your initial faction thread seems only to confirm it. It shows, from both the lore page to things like your attempts to actually use the wiki (nobody in $currentyear cares about the wiki). There are overinflated claims in your request ("have organised an event" that's not yet happened, "proven leadership" that has only joined a few weeks ago, numbers that don't sound particularly right). Your goals are not precise.

I'm just honestly not sure if this is ever going to get off the ground with quality required to justify it being official. You just give off the vibe that you are a group of players who want to play a video game together. That's not a bad thing.

But cobbling together a faction with quite basic tropes thrown into the lore and requesting officialdom straight away ain't the way to do it. Speaking from hard hearned personal experience here.

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